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My fascination with eyes led me to sketch this. This is my first attempt at sketching a detailed eye.
I am not happy with the result, as its not detailed enough.

Any comments/tips are appreciated.

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:iconhybridcritter:
Beautiful! <3

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:iconeishiya:
I think tbe upper eyelid is a bit too thick, and eyelashes taper to a finer point. Some blooe vessels might also be visible in the inner corner. Otherwise I think this is great, plenty of details.
:iconkoronass:
I think its detailed plenty. A lot of work must have went into this. Great Piece!
:iconsarah-3:
I'd have to agree with eishiya, the upper eyelid is a tad too thick and the eyelashes are too thick. They are usually thinner, unless they have mascara on but in that case, it would still be coming to a finer point at the end.
Also, the iris you have drawn isn't very circular. Normally, irises are nearly perfect circles.
The eyelashes on the bottom of the lid don't grow that far into the left corner of the eye either. They usually stop at about 2mm or so to the pink part of the corner.

Other than that, it's really great. I might try this soon.
:iconsmartie:
thanks for the crit! because honestly, i am not happy with the way i sketched it. Also, the lashes was meant to have mascara, but i dont think i did a great job there. i also havent sketched in about a year i think - so I need to get back into the swing of things.

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:iconsmartie:
actually hardly any work went into it - lazily done. i guess its my own fault that im not happy with it.
but thanks for the comment and for liking it! :)

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:iconsmartie:
thanks for the crit - as i said i am not happy with it at all.and i have lots to learn! this was sketched from a close-up picture of someone's eye and the top eyelid was actually that thick. The lashes are meant to have mascara, but maybe I didnt do it that well. the bottom lashes on the picture actually had these fine hairs on the inner corner, but i agree with u, its not the usual case. thanks for pointing all of this out! any other tips you have are welcome. Im still a learner.

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:iconkajunartist:
well I think it came out pretty darn good for one that has not drawn in a year!
at least I can tell it's an eye!!!! LOL
and a very well done eye at that! :)

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:icondutchshun:
I think its pretty amazing how you have drawn this eye.

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